by blueday
You might want to look into the volunteer editing program.
It was well written, but too many minor typos.
Regards, DJ
That a straight girl walks into a bar-That a girl sits down next to her--Five minutes later girl #2 drops her purse--As the two girls pick ip the stuff girl number 2 begins playing with the pussy of girle number 1 and then they are offf into the wild blue yonder---
Har-de-har-har-har
Let's try to make the stories believable at least.
I really enjoyed this! It's a great quick fantasy! The charachters are nice, the sex is vivid! It certainly aroused me!
Great job!
I really enjoyed this! It's a great quick fantasy! The charachters are nice, the sex is vivid! It certainly aroused me!
Great job!