All Comments on 'Just What I Needed'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
A good story but it does need some editing.

You might want to look into the volunteer editing program.

It was well written, but too many minor typos.

Regards, DJ

don-donna2don-donna2about 18 years ago
Totally unbelievable

That a straight girl walks into a bar-That a girl sits down next to her--Five minutes later girl #2 drops her purse--As the two girls pick ip the stuff girl number 2 begins playing with the pussy of girle number 1 and then they are offf into the wild blue yonder---

Har-de-har-har-har

Let's try to make the stories believable at least.

walkingeaglewalkingeagleabout 18 years ago
Great story! Wonderful Fantasy!

I really enjoyed this! It's a great quick fantasy! The charachters are nice, the sex is vivid! It certainly aroused me!

Great job!

walkingeaglewalkingeagleabout 18 years ago
Great story! Wonderful Fantasy!

I really enjoyed this! It's a great quick fantasy! The charachters are nice, the sex is vivid! It certainly aroused me!

Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
straight

Tell another one your straight ya and i'm the pope.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
If

If she only eats, then she didn't cheat.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Loved it. Wonder if she continue with the ladies

Busman19639Busman196399 months ago

A nice story with a different twist.

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