All Comments on 'Just What I Needed'

Great story, well told. Thanks.

I can't believe this is your only story. This is so good.

Keep them coming.

Totally refreshing to read this from a woman's perspective

You got expecting some more rough stuff, maybe next time?

If this is your first story... I can't wait for the others... I hope there will be...

You really should write more. Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté

more please more o im begging for more this story is great please keep it going thank you for your time and effort .

Spoiled by the crap of the condom he should have just pushed is cock in and shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy

This is story land no VD or babies

Good Story, well written! Keep it up!

Please keep writing ur talent is quite good and it makes me quite sad that u have not continued writing.I am quite patient though ...

I truly enjoyed the story, the writing was very well done. I enjoyed the buildup, thought the worried hand-wringing was well thought out. Glad she finally got some of the aggressive action she needed. No pressure, as I'm sure so many of the other comments have begged, nay -demanded- more from you. Let me just say that there must be more stories you'd like to tell. After reading the farcical, tongue in cheek satire "Saga of Littown" you edited for Xarth, I decided I needed a break from his "formula" and looked you up on the site. I for one would like to read anything you care to submit. Hopefully there will be more, someday.

Both the story and the writers skills. Well thought out and crafted. Each sentence and paragraph created and built block by block until a complete structure (story)remains.

I hope you find time to again give us, the readers, the joy of your efforts.

Now I understand those happy sounds emanating from apartment 302.

Everyone should be so happy.

Lisa Ann

I seriously love this story usually siblings is not my normal reading but this story is second to none. It has ever thing you could need in a story: love, sex, suspense and more! I loved it!! I wish you would write more to this story, it makes me wish for a brother instead of being an only child!

Please please write a second part to this story

Really good stuff! Very well written and I liked her perspective on things. I wasn't sure at first since the brother seemed kind of a nutjob that I was having trouble relating to, but things smoothed out nicely once he got his head out of his ass, hehehe. He kind of lost it there for a bit! If he had wanted her that long, he had to have worked a million scenarios out in his head, so his primary concerns should have been, does she really want me too and how can we keep this hidden and make it work! He got there, just took a while ;)

It's exacerbated, not exasperated. Page 2 during the party, little more than half way down the page, "exasperated my frustration".

Also and much more problematic, a one bedroom apartment? Really? You don't think Mom's going to want to pop by to see her kids since she's "in the neighborhood"?

Your dialog is very good, felt natural. I find this is the clearest difference between with new and/or lesser authors and the more polished ones.

Shame you appear to be " one and done", hope you come back.

Great start please write more. You're very good setting the mood and building tension and desire.

Reminds me of Justin & John = Isn't love strange....

Often the one you truly love happens to be pushed to the backroads of our minds when current interests rush in.

This was so good, pity I only discovered this one after so many years.

I you ever change your mind, I (we) will be waiting there (at your command)...

Overall, what a rush! Masterful or maybe mistressful, but top score.

Loved your build up, the insecurity and doubt. And finally the passion. Very well written. Found you when looking at the "favorites list" of one of my favorites, One Hit Wanda.

I hope you can write some more. And one other thing, don't get caught up in continuing this story. It was concluded nicely and left me satisfied. Another tale would be appreciated.

Thank You

I just want to say this was superbly well written. You may not have published a lot, but your experience with editing has definitely paid off. Please keep it up!

But it's just unfinished. I like one guys moniker on this site "Finishthedamnstory" LOL!

There aren't enough quality sibcest stories from the sister's view. You need to fix that!

You definitely can write. Thank you for this hot story!

Nice of you to mention her armpits, her being barefoot, her bare legs.

Please more stories!

I first read this story when you published it and it’s always been one of my favorites. I have checked back periodically to see if you had written more. I recently saw the forward you wrote on one of Xarth’s stories and had to revisit this story again. I can’t believe it’s been 7 long years I’ve been waiting for another story from you. PLEASE don’t make us wait any longer :-(

I liked it, a lot! I think is very well done, thanks for sharing it with us. I am looking forward to reading more from you in the future.

I liked it and believe you have a real talent that you need to further explore. CINCO ESTRELLAS!

This was a great read. Why have you not continued to submit stories? Have you stopped writing? Please do not waste your talent. Write!!

So why did she stop him when he was eating her out? Did she want to edge herself or did she just not wanna cum for some reason? Also, what was she going to say there at the end after Dany asked her what she thought and before he interrupted her?

I hope you will grace us with another chapter (or three) to this wonderful story.

I enjoyed the story very much. Thanks so much for sharing it 😊.

shit

so so insanely good

but sadly it feels like you're done writing :(

Written really well but a cliffhanger?

I just finished this story. Although I'm not much into brother/sister incest, this was just so wonderfully written I could stop until I got the end. You words painted a deliciously erotic picture, very arousing how they finally united. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.

Well for a first timer, that was brilliant. You and your story went straight into my favourites.

Keep writing like this and you’ll stay there, so please another sibling story.

I scored you at 5/5, l wish l could give it more. Will definitely keep an eye out for your works.

Thank you.

Five stars aren't enough. You have real writing talent. Please, please share it some more.

Very enjoyable! Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Absolute. Perfection!! So intricate and sentimental -- beautiful Liz. Xx

The description of both the personalities of the main characters and their interactions is much more realistic than the content of the average story around here. I would love to read more from you if you'd produce it and post it. Thank you very much!

Loved it.........pure briliance

I read this story based of Xarth's recommendation. It is quite obvious that your editing experience put you head & shoulders above most authors posting their 1 st story. You knocked it out of the park with your very 1st attempt! I look forward to reading more of your work.

Great story, I wish you would write more.

More please!

That was really good

If this os your 1st attempt, I'd like to read following ones. Keep going, you're on the right track!

Top notch story. 5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️❤️

Please, please, please continue giving us your stories...please 😁

Echoing what others have said: good story, well executed. Very good writing. Very good editing. Believable and realistic. Please write more.

Please write more. You have a good voice.

Your first story? You have a gift. I'll read everything you write. Please continue.

100% accurate, real world, and riveting. Long stories and I almost never meet.

But I looked up your story because you edit and I always want the see deeper into an editor's head.

Please share more with us?

Thanks.

DOUGout

A wild and different take on this , and it was a bit strange but also a lot of it felt real. I gave you 5 stars because of the originality, some of it actually worried me so I definitely got the realism ! You are a very good writer! And this is your work. Maybe Xarth helped you a bit but there is noway this reads like a xarth story. The dialogue doesn't. have his dryness.

And I don't mean that in a bad way. He can make me laugh at characters.

But, you! You scared me! I don't know if it was the believable emotio n or the John Grisham and John Sanford spine chills without the gore. which I have no use for anyway.

And your sex scenes are so very VERY good. After reading hundreds of stories and likely thousands throughout my life, it has become obvious whether a female or a male is writing about oral sex. Women seem to get into so much detail about what a guys dick does , the little jerks, jolts twitches etc. ,and how it always gets a vocal response when you get the

"male clitoris", that underside just below the head. soooo sensitive where too much too soon can make a guy pull up his knees and beg for a break. same as too much clitoral pressure is a painful jolt to you ladies. One girlfriend never ceased to make me chuckle to myself. If I did any more than blow soft warm air on it when starting out , I would get a verbal warning or even a cuff to the side of the head. But, after spending the required time bringing everything up to proper temp, and she was finally ready for her teapot whistle to start screaming, I could lick it, bat it with my tongue rub my chin over it, and even nibble on it if her shrieks were loud enough, and she loved it. What a difference!

But I would have to say you are no stranger to oral stimulation of a phallus. ( That sounds so much classier than , well you know. ). And I mean that with both admiration and respect.

I have not read any of these other 150 reviews as I was so full of thought i just started writing.As long as no cretins made any undue comments I won't have to write a second comment where I take them apart. I know you asked for directness and as long as it is honest and they are not blaming you for their life problems, thats ok.

Finally(!) I thought at first this was going to be one of those god awful bits where the participants just know the police "incest squad" is out in a van with a big ear listening device waiting to hear moans before rushing in to uphold the morals of our society, lol!

Just writing such ludicrous drivel is tough. Nobody has ever been on the 10 pm news covering their faces as the incest squad brings in another pair of sexual degenerates.

PLEASE! Spare us such ludicrous thought. And if they think their imaginary friend is going to curse them, then they need to dream up a different one, preferably one that does not have sodomizing priests as his front line representatives.

A fine story of a quality I would expect for a 100th story, not a first.! Should you ever need a proofer or edit help, write Old Uncle Al here and I will reply immediately as it would be an honor to assist such a talent ineven the most meager of ways.

Your Old Uncle Al

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Incredible writing!!!!

More please!!!

You are too gifted a storyteller to stop with just this.

I'm not asking for more incest.

The realism you brought, the dialogues, the characters, the emotions,...

More of them, please!!!!

Thanks for sharing! The unraveling of the relationship with the boyfriend was done very well.

Why God why you stop writing?? You are unbelievable good. Please continue 🙏🙏

Well written...nice pace of the action in the story. Motivations and reasoning for crossing the westermark is somewhat absent but overall better than most others on the site.

A great story spoiled by the condoms this is story land no babies vd etc

This was lovely. The progression felt natural and you could feel the relationship growing. You did a great job making the characters feel real.

So good to see that the author reserved the last chapter to allow the two main characters to reach a level of desire and sexual anticiption such that the sex berween the two main characters was believable and satisfying. Pleasure to find such good story development.

Fabulous. A pity about the condom, they need to have perfect intimate contact - I have never used one (had a vasectomy eons ago!) They need an intense intimacy.

Next part awaited.

This is so much better than most of the stories on here. You did a stunning job and made it feel like it was possible. I wish you luck on future projects.

Why have you not written more stories? This one has been my absolute favorite for years, and I read Xarth and Youbadboy over and over. Please! Write more stories.

This was kind of pathetic

I think it was great. The opposite of what Calulu482 beneath me thinks

Like them, and appreciate you left her a bit of a muffin, not completely bald...

Seems like they're good for each other....

You should write more....

Why aren’t there more stories? Excellent work!

Really good story love the contrast between romance and fucking good balance keep it up