All Comments on 'Kait's Story Ch. 01'

Very sexy story. You might consider an editor, though, as there are many run-on sentences here that distract from your story. Otherwise, quite well done.

Cheers,

Lalenya :^)

I don't comment often

Well Done!

Laurie

be damned about any concern with a run on sentence,,, this is great reading

thank you

Kait gets turned into a 24/7 CDA (cum depository area) by a self inflated douche-bag with more money than common sense. Zzzzzzzz No thanks. jahoo