All Comments on 'Kaity at the Club Ch. 05'

it could use a bit more action and description of the abuse she is taking. I am eager to see what comes next.

where is the auction story? Are there more chapters coming. I am digging the story..keep Kaity coming...

Great story that left readers hanging for more! Hate it when an author with a sexy tale like this one leaves the readers waiting for more & then quits!

Thanks for the comment, albeit Anonymous :) I wrote this story when I started grad school, with every expectation of following it up. But I wrote myself into a corner - I couldn’t come up with a substantial beginning, middle and end for an auction. It is pretty much, she goes on stage, bids are made, and she goes with the winner. But now that I have more experience, I put myself in her place and will take a shot. Or maybe an older Kaity will prep Bonnie from my other story.

I like it but I hope you are going to have the auction soon I can't wait to read it

Great story but it needs a proper ending. One that does justice to her losing her virginity and her getting all the money she needs for her church too.

This story was "hella good," but gotta have the auction. What would I do with Kaity if I was there? Ummm, I can think of some really nasty things, but I'd love to fuck her ass and then make her clean my cock.