All Comments on 'Kandi, Daddy's Slut'

Desperately needs an edit and more storyline.

Needs proofreading, an edit, and skip the emoticons.

I don't know if you were trying hard to sound like a ghetto rat, or you really are,but either way this story is horrendously bad.

This has got to be the worst story I've ever read!!!!

It was ok, but if you were a virgin he would have broke your hyman/hymenal tissue and bled. Not man men would want to eat you with all that blood there. Seems like a truly fake story

He only got into her, after he found out that she was the color purple, still working at the club that HE USED TO GO TO, all the time (he would know what the coloring contest was then), and that she was still a virgin, so he banged her in the car? Wow.. Bad :(