All Comments on 'Kathy's Initiation'

what a teaser.

But more sex please and ass worship

This has left me aching foe more. please more

This would be a nice prologue or prequel to some bigger work, but as a stand alone story it's quite poor (as opposite to rich, not to good)

a beautiful quick humiliating story

But too shory,one page works for flash stories,but you would be better served writing longer chapters .Some we will say writing like this wets the appetite,but what it does is piss off the readers.