All Comments on 'Katie aka Sandi aka Sandra'

The writing could use some work. It lacked background info on the characters and a motivation for the plot. THe dialogue seems a bit choppy and unrealistic. the storyline. while a good one, doesn't really seem developed.

Absolute rambling rubbish - it is one of the worst stories on this site. None of it made any sense. You lost me on the first few paragraphs, so I didn't bother to finish it.

you totally lost me! get the name straight please. who the f*ck are you talking about when you are writing your story?

have you even read what you submitted? I couldn't.