Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'Katie's Journey Ch. 02'

by SilverDrake

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 4 Comments
DragosLoveDragosLoveover 9 years ago
Interesting

I'm enjoying it, but the chapters are annoyingly short.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Just awful

And had you posted it in Sci/Fi it STILL would have been wildly implausible and unbelievable. No stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

make the chapters longer

hindsight2020hindsight2020over 9 years ago
Too short.

Not really chapters. The best I can give is a "keep writing" 3 *s.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

Katie's Journey Ch. 03 Next Part
Katie's Journey Previous Part
Katie's Journey Series Info