All Comments on 'Katy Takes a Swingers Cruise'

Great detail on games - characters wre inconsistent - a little tweaking would make this one of the best

This story had a great premise, excellent characters and fine details. Either Katy needed to be auctioned to a great looking guy for 3 hrs of hot sex or the couple needed to buy a secong woman who was as hot as Katy. I'm not sure why you chose a mousey red head.

Thanks for a fantstic story! I haven't checked yet but I'm hoping you have more posted! This cruise sounds like it would be a perfect vacation for my little slut wife and myself! Keep up the great writing!!

I think Katy is the type of woman who thinks that it's all right if she has someone pleasure her how ever she wants, but not let her husband any fun. She is a controlling bitch that needs to have her ass spanked. Her husband has to find out what she wants the most or what she fears the most, and then hold that over her head and use that to control her. The only thing is; he's a wimp, and she will cuckold him eventually, and that's the story I want to read. Thanks for the story, it's been fun reading your work..........Rich

Swinging is your thing, than go for it, but there was no romance, better your marriage than mine.

Stupid swinging story.

It says “Swingers” in the title and that is exactly what I expected and enjoyed reading about. Great job on the story and hope to see you writing more!

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This was a good story that fits the theme well. I don't like this type of story but thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.

I'm a sucker for swinger stories - and yours was a pleasure to read. You had everything!

I loved the different varieties of group sex games and exhibitionism presented in this story. Good lord was there a lot of fucking, sucking, and cum play. Wonderful description and very creative.

You can bet I masturbated quite a few times as I read your story - which I guess was the point! lol.

I couldn't find a mention of National Nude Day, but there certainly was a lot of public nudity and sex which is the whole point.

Keep up the good writing and hope you get a lot of votes.

Nanga

Cruise is over, all whores ashore. No imagination, dull as an old lawnmower blade.