All Comments on 'Katy's Boobs Ch. 03'

Ahoy there. I've been watching for your newest addition to this story, and finally, it arrived. I eagerly read through it and enjoyed it, even more so considering that you're actually focusing on plot entanglements and character relationships instead of just steamy sex. Don't get me wrong, there is certainly evidence of the latter in your story, but it's nicely dressed with a well-presented plot.<br><br>While this chapter was certainly enjoyable, in my opinion it didn't quite live up to the cliffhanger set forth by chapter 2. When Ellen confronted Tom about the boxers, I honestly thought things would go a very different way. Things certainly became interesting once Tom successfully lied and dodged the bullet, but after the build-up inherent in chapter 3 (Ellen's confession and revealing explanation to Tom regarding her hopes of him and Katy), I definitely expected Tom to finally come clean and confess to it being him. The only pickle, I suppose, is that Katy technically didn't know it was Tom who'd fucked her in the first place, so that could've also created an awkwardness. Still, it would've been a selfless move for him to finally confess in order to save face for Jack. I suppose that could still happen, though.<br><br>Tom's mysteriously revealed scheme by the end was a nice addition, but as I said before, I was rooting for him to be a good guy and come clean. Alas, for the sake of erotica and sexy family encounters, perhaps Tom's ace in the hole is for the best. Keep up the swell work.<br><br>-JM

Finally part 3. very nicely written.

you are one hell of a writer. you are in my favourites and the only one in it. love all your stories. eagerly anticipating your next one. btw, i wonder, did aunt ellen eventually get her pills?

I've been waiting ever since you posted Ch 2 for this one. I'm impressed yet again and unlike many writers on here I can fine no grammatical errors or spelling errors. Shows you take the the time and effort to make a truly good story. I can't wait for the 4th installment. :)

Please Tommy, breed me. I miss u inside me.Kelly

For instance - "I know it sounds quite bazaar ..."

No, but it did sound bizarre!

A bazaar is a market, especially an Arab or Oriental one.

Having got used to ur part story ending punch lines, the lack of one in this one was a let down

Ha..#1 son has a plan to interrupt brother

Sister fling, and ease auntie worry..

Good story, now the end?

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

I am starting the next chapter immediately.

Don't you think that Jack would know if those were his boxers or not? Is he going to catch J and K and then blackmail them? Hmmm.

Awesome tale you have started.

Fantastic writing with incredible characters,

I can’t wait to see where you take us.

What a devious mind you have.

I can’t get my work done.

All I want to do is read!

Okay, so one correction that I felt compelled to make...I have caught spelling errors in your other stories and ignored them. But I have to address 'bazaar'. You should have used bizarre instead. Bizarre is a synonym for strange or weird. But bazaar is a group of stores or shops. 🤔

Once again I rated this 3/5 for Aunt Ellen's infidelity. And to make matters worse, you have her openly admitting that she's in the wrong but continues to commit her sin. I was going to knock this down to a two, but I gave you a point back for the parental consent. Aunt Ellen actually approving of Tom dating and marrying Katy is awesome. 👌 I hope that you will take them down that path. 🙏

That kid, (a.k.a. the author. hee hee ). , is one devious little hoser! He sets these things up and gets away with them! Only because He has the exact correct amount of guile and cunning. Great read, if I was 50 years younger, I would be taking notes! lol

Oh I just HAD to comment on this guy!

Who in the the wide wide world of sports deducts points for morality when he himself is sitting here reading INCEST stories, for crying out loud.!!? That is so hypocritical, so all out unbelievably WRONG, they don’t even have a word for it because NOBODY IS THAT SCREWED UP!! But, enough humans go by and lo and behold, there he is….the guy we need a word for.

You just hold on you sick-o. I have wikipedia on it now trying to figure out a suitably foul word as a description for you.

JUICY, JUICY, JUICY!!! This hot and entailing with all your erotic turns. Your level of story telling really draws you in. I tell that Tom is one cunning character. While I think that Tom should just spit it out about his deception. I do understand firstly his thought of self preservation may be Paramount, it obvious that is also trying not to be a snitch. One because he doesn't want to hurt Katy and possibly ruin things for another chance with her. And he possibly does don't want to get Jack in trouble too. But truthfully since his aunt has given him the green light, he might as well come Clean about everything. His aunt ain't no dummy, she basically already know what's going on anyway.