All Comments on 'Keeping Charlie Alive Ch. 01'

So many unanswered questions! Just the suspense of not knowing exactly what is going on is fantastic.

Looking forward to future chapters.

Great first chapter but where's the rest of the story. You've written this as ch 1 , so, supposedly there's more to follow, but it's over a year now & still nothing further. Yet you have written another story since, so come on, don't be like some other authors who don't follow through on their tales. 4**** because you haven't finished.