by Handley_Page
Great first chapter but where's the rest of the story. You've written this as ch 1 , so, supposedly there's more to follow, but it's over a year now & still nothing further. Yet you have written another story since, so come on, don't be like some other authors who don't follow through on their tales. 4**** because you haven't finished.
So many unanswered questions! Just the suspense of not knowing exactly what is going on is fantastic.
Looking forward to future chapters.