by Balrog
Didn't like this ending as well as Ch. 05. It was hard to believe that Amanda was a virgin, especially coming on like a seasoned seductress.
I anticipated that after her punicshment then Kelly and Justin would either have one hot and torrid fantasy session about the three of them together or actually hatch a plan to get the three together. It would be tricky handling the emotional side of the issues, but it would have been intriguing to see what you would have come up with.
Neither seemed like an ending, exactly, but I guess they could be.
We'll see what the author has in mind!!
I much preferred the ending in Chapter 5 because the romance makes the sex so much hotter. Keep going with the original storyline if possible, or start a brand new story.
You're one of my favorite authors on literotica so far. Keep it up :).
I really liked how this story was going; don't really like the trickery of this one... so scandalous. Not my cup of tea. I think you should stick with the original plot...
It was good at first then I don't know the ending part so the guy had sex with amanda and kelly.
That was BULL S***!!!!!
But it was a really good story.
Don't think I would have been able to resist Amanda.
Yeah, not as nice an ending as Part 5, but I dig the playfulness at work to take it in this direction. Courage! Bravo!
Read the whole chapter series and i must say i'm impressed. Plus the alternate ending is really unique.