by Stephen_Heathcote
Was just starting to settle into it and they collapsed on the bed and what?!?...Nooo, that can't be the end already, I only got to unbuttoning my jeans. Didn't even make it to the zipper!!! More please?
Thanks, Jetpacksam. I hadn't considered that, but if there's interest we can certainly explore what happens next.
How will her freedom at play affect her life?
How will her Marriage last?
I of course have no idea if you were planning it, but more chapters of Kelly's journey would be most welcome.
So many Anonymous commenters -- forgive me for not responding directly.
Anonymous 1: Go make that "if only" happen if it brings the color back to your life, but be careful. Find a "William" you can trust.
Anonymous 2: Thanks very much for the kind words, and your suggestion is duly noted for next time.
I actually liked the story, a good story doesn't need to contain sex however a warning that it does not is helpful for people looking only for that. I think that, for the length of the story, it did a decent job of building Kelly's character and set expectations of a real Dom versus the fantasy Dom's. Congrats Stephen_Heathcote on a pretty decent short story.
Thank you, Anonymous. I greatly appreciate both your time and your comment. (And no, I'm not a working mother.)
This is the saddest bdsm story I have ever read. It is probably of the most realistic stories on the website. Whoever wrote this sounds like a working mother. I am happy that the protagonist seemed to get what she needed out of the experience.
Yes, in a way I suppose some Doms are like psychologists....