by Ramznow
You have great taste in women!
Your story is solid but you need to grow it out more. When it comes to the sex, try to be more descriptive with it, ex: their body parts and emotions.
You're off to a good start and I can't wait to read your future stories.
A request, I would like to see do a story on Martina Hingis, like a comparison piece. Your 90's experience to present-day Martina .
That would give you lots to work with.