All Comments on 'Keri Is So Very...'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Keri made me merry

Any chance Keri and company were observed? Would like to read something of the nc/reluctant theme with her and a stranger or two. Don't let this stepmom go to waste.

don87654don87654over 14 years ago
A lot more could have been written....

This story lacked a lot of possibilities.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
I can't believe a teenager could not want a MILF

I'm surprised that he wasn't after her like a shark in a feeding frenzy. A hot mature piece of ass like his step mom and I would think her would fuck her cross-eyed. He still hasn't fucked her up the ass yet. Give us another chapter with the rest of the story. Thanks ......Rich

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Please write more...

This story was unbelievably hot! Please have more of this MILF and her stepson!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

great story you should make sequals the best thing about the story is that he didnt drop his girlfriend in the book just for the stepmom like they do in the story the girlfriend was my favorite character you should make more

TUCSON REDTUCSON REDalmost 11 years ago
AGAIN

VERY NICE LOVE THE CONCEPT. WOULD LOVE TO FIND SOME PICTURES OF MY OWN MOM.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
hmmmm wow very nice

should bring the step moms friends in to play next time

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
5 STARS

One feature that added to the eroticism of the story was the wild girlfriend helping to seduce his stepmom (actually, Courtney did most all the initial seducing), and being a co-conspirator.

Well set up.

Well played out.

Well written.

It's a complete, finished story, as is.

Although I get the commenters who want a sequel. (But not the one who wants anal.)

Paul in Oklahoma

mrdata9770mrdata9770over 2 years ago

(9/28/2021) I agree with Paul 99.999% (of two years ago below). I did find one (maybe two) misplaced words. Sometimes, I scan the comments when finishing a story I would rate higher than a 5 (if I could). I like to check for Jealous Trolls and enjoy calling them out in my comments. The first comment I read was perfect. Seemed as if He was reading my future mind. I started to hear the theme from the Twilight Zone. I couldn’t have written it any better. So I decided to plagiarize it. You submitted this story in 2009 and haven’t submitted anything since 2016, but I did see that you accessed your Bio this month. I figure you get many “More Please” comments, but I need to say this story is series-worthy. 5 stars as well from me. “One feature that added to the eroticism of the story was the wild girlfriend helping to seduce his stepmom (actually, Courtney did most all the initial seducing), and being a co-conspirator. Well set up. Well played out. Well written. It's a complete, finished story, as is. Although I get the commenters who want a sequel. (But not the one who wants anal.) Paul in Oklahoma”

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Just writing sexy stories as an outlet for my overactive imagination. Many have origins in reality and I spin the tales from there.