by harrie1963
I loved the way this story pulled together so many different threads, managed to keep them separate enough to follow without effort, and yet blended them into one, cohesive story.
It's probably one of the most enjoyable stories I have read.
WTG harrie :-)
This one had everything. A real nice flow,characters and a very satisfying culmination. TOP NOTCH work.
Thanks for this really hot story. I plan to catch up with all your work here.
great read,stayed hard all the way through. my wife and i read it together. thanks
awesome story, really appreciate it all being in one story and not having to get out to go to another chapter, a great way to bring a family together
i totally loved this story. i think it was an awesome peice and all of the chapters fit together nicely. i cant wait to read more submissions from you.
WOW. I was just looking for a random story to read about my favorite subject of incest and found a treasure. This story was one of the best that I have read on here and I have read a lot. The way you brought everyone together was incredible and it kept me wet throughout. I will be reading more of your submissions. Keep up the great work!!!!
I loved this - read it over several days - and "enjoyed" it every time. :)
This story was so good that I would have kept reading if it was twice as long. Great job. Thanks.
A really long great incest based story. So many characters but all gel together like a professionally written book. FIVE STAR STORY.
Great Story.....Marvellous Plot/Backdrop..Where are you now....?
These must be some of the best erotic novels ever written. These are explosive and hot compared with that gets sold for five dollars on net. Your novels are volcanic hot.
Then add the distinctive backdrop and details. It is not difficult to start imagining that characters are having sex in reality.
Why stop writing?
Hats off to you... YOU ROCK MAN
The sign of a good writer is how often the reader is willing to come back.
And with you Harrie, it's again and again and again.