All Comments on 'Kerri and Sarah'

It's an OK start, but sure needs a second chapter. A few grammatical issues but a good first story.

I agree with everyone else. Shorter disclaimer. That said, WOW. That was a great start and i can't wait for more. Also, you need to give us a more detailed description for each sister. As detailed as you can possibly get. Also, if you are thinking of going this way, sounds like the mom would definitely be into a family 3 some.

I really love this story. It's just so sweet and lovely.

Please finish the story with another chapter and leave no detail out, I want to know what they're bodies are feeling, what they're thinking and what emotions are going though them. Thanks.

That story was to short