All Comments on 'Kevin Surrenders'

by lionel_collins

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Dreaming

Hot story, makes me wish I could meet Tony or Kev.

cumjunkycumjunkyover 17 years ago
Great Writing

Normally I don't finish reading 4 part stories that don't get to the fucking action quickly, but you did a great job keeping the excitement level up. Good stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Hot

Wow, man. I wanted to spoon him too. My cock was so hard it hurt. Great story.

SachsSachsabout 17 years ago
Wow

Nice that everything turned out ok, and man that was hot. I'm quickly becoming addicted to your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
good story...

I thought your story was good and hot but badly written, the speech and the transition was off.

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