by lionel_collins
I thought your story was good and hot but badly written, the speech and the transition was off.
Nice that everything turned out ok, and man that was hot. I'm quickly becoming addicted to your writing.
Wow, man. I wanted to spoon him too. My cock was so hard it hurt. Great story.
Normally I don't finish reading 4 part stories that don't get to the fucking action quickly, but you did a great job keeping the excitement level up. Good stuff.