All Comments on 'King's Justice'

No, seriously, orc women don't get enough attention. With most people having stories about Orc men screwing fantasy elves, you'd think there would be more women going out to even the score on some human men!

That said, if the next story was to focus on the King's wife and the orc men that captured her, I wouldn't mind seeing that either. All around I just want to see some orcs and stuff, I guess.

The mix of sex to plot in this genre needs to be 60% plot 40% sex.

You've got it about right

Next we eed some plot and some character development

Good start.

Seriously thank you all for the comments and the helpful tips, I enjoy hearing from my readers and I get excited at any and all comments! Thank you again, I appreciate it.

Can't wait to read a sequel. Hopefully when Khalyna is pregnant. Keep up the great work.