All Comments on 'Kissins Cousins'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Kissins Cousins

Great story good start this can go on a long way you must give us some more of this story

deerejohndeerejohnabout 20 years ago
LIKE IT

MORE, MORE, MORE PLEASE!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Thanks

Wish I could write as well as you. Thanks for sharing with us.

juanjsojrjuanjsojrabout 20 years ago
hot story

write more I like this story alot it was hot

juanjsojrjuanjsojrover 19 years ago
hot story

it was really hot do more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Safe sex

You might consider having the girl put a condom on the guy.

It is important that folks who are not ready to get married avoid having babies. I love sex, and sex without condoms is a wonderful feeling, but it makes babies!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
great story

Hey I just read your story, and I really thought it was great. Not only was he content great, but it was very well written. The way I judge writing is that I try to picture it in my head...if I get a good picture, it was a good story, if I don't I didn't like it much. I had a very clear picture in my head for yours. Thank you for writing it, you definitely have talent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
great story

Great writing. Please continue with this story

Spirt_of_the_FoxSpirt_of_the_Foxabout 18 years ago
awsome

This is a awsome story,u really do have some talent.Like the others said please write more stories like that or contenue with that one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Wow...

You have to make this into a series. Not only is it amazingly hot and sexy, but now I want to find out what happens in their lives, not just the bedroom (although that's very impressive as well) :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
great

This is great!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
well done nickles !

amazingly tantalizing and erotic. keep writing more,...more....more....plssssssss!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
awesome!

this story was amazing...what happens next? more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
NOT GOOD AT ALL

very poorly written did you flunk grade school misspelled words missing words etc. you should be ashamed to say you wrote and posted this trash. it's stories like this that make readers keep saying USE A GOOD EDITOR BEFORE POSTING. delete and do it right or not at all.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Unconsciously staring

Makes me think of a corpse with its eyes wide open. I think you mean subconsciously staring.

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