All Comments on 'Kitten'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great Start

A great tale and a hot one at that. Keep at it! Can't wait for the next one!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
good story

Nice story I hope to see you write more. That said I think you saying "he ran his hands over my kitten ears" or "gave him a kitten lick on the cheek" kinda ruined the picture the sentinces are good but there's no need for the kitten part. But all in all a good story

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