by jacobmerriweather
I shouldn't have liked this as much as I did. I could never do that to another person, but it was oddly entertaining though very, very wrong....
I know I'm twisted for liking this, but i really did. A lot. I want to be that girl.......
Well written, but I didn't notice that till now, because I was totally wrapped up in there, and feeling it all.
I said that after reading the very last sentence.
It was really good
I usually don't like stories to have chapters but I would love to seeat more of this story. Really well written and exactly what I've been looking for.
Because of all the positive feedback and questions for a sequel I'll definitely be writing one soon. Still brainstorming though, feel free to let me know what you'd like to see in the next installment and I'll do my best to incorporate it.
Not my kind of read. It wasn't too long nor too short. Dialogue could be better.
Came here after reading that one about the magazine-seller. Liked that one. This one is good for revenge-immersion, which I love.
I know that this is fantasy (for some people) and took an escape-rout through your brain, but I won't fucking sleep if I don't gate-crash.
1)You mentioned her becoming wet during a meal. Only some foods are said to trigger a sexual response from the body. But I've had a series of near-orgasms when I got hold of arbitrary food again after misfortune. So food can actually get you wet and rearing.
2)The female homo-sapien does Not have a G-spot in her anus. It's located at the other side of the vagina, not on the thin membrane between the two orifices. The male does though. It is called the prostrate and if stimulated correctly, produces euphoric pleasure, sometimes creating a white fluid. The feeling is also very addictive. I couldn't be bothered. A strap-on is for correction.
Excuse me, I'm going to go dream about breaking all the furniture in the men's home and writing ''restrained male anal slags inside house' on their post-box. It really is a lot of fun.
Thanx for story.
Evebroughtanaxthistime
I always loved this one! 5 stars. Iโm sorry anonymous assholes post bs comments telling you your sick. I think your very talented.