All Comments on 'Kneel'

Great title and a great, well-written erotica short. Strong convincing characters and dialogue and vivid descriptions of sex and the relationship dynamic between sub and her master make this a very enjoyable read. Recommended.

This is exactly the kind of erotica I was hoping to find when I clicked on your story. This was a great look into the BDSM dynamic for anyone that isn't familiar with it previously and a great read for those that are well-versed in the lifestyle. Kudos!

Damn i just might send this to daddy i want this

I love how human he is, often Doms can be dehumanising and abusive and there's a fine line there; this is sexy and dominating while also being gentle and respectful of her as a person. I love it <3

This is how eventually I want to learn how to write. I loved it!

This is a spectacular story, hits so many wonderful notes and a great balance of pain, pleasure, sensuality, fun & sweetness. Truly enjoying your writing, very vivid imagery and beautiful D/s dynamics. Thanks for posting!