All Comments on 'K's Candy Ch. 013'

Your story was mentioned in the New Story Review thread found on Literotica's Bullitin Board in the Author's Hangout forum. ~ Red

This story continues to delight. You have warm and loving characters, and a world of accurately perceived details. The moment when candy feels her collar tighten as she is introduced to yet another man, and her keen awareness of each subsequent glance as cashiers, waitresses and passers-by perceive her collared submission, make her humiliation real. Delicious. Take all the chapters you please to enslave her a few hours at a time. This is a good, long erotic novel, getting underway.

Kind of wish the installments were longer. But on the other hand I notice you're using 3 digits for the installment number. Sounds like there'll be plenty to read!

this isn't my normal kind of story but the way you write is so interesting the way it pulls you in I can't wait for more insallments and hope that this grows into a long and powerful novel