All Comments on 'LA John Ch. 01'

I read it & the second I saw the celeb's name, I considered saving the series on my PC somewhere to wait for later Chapters...

...If only there weren't so many "she her" pairings (& the like, which should be fixed before submission, let alone approval & posting), & a bunch of spelling issues.

Thankyou for taking the time to read this story. I do sincerely apologize for the spelling errors and other mistakes that i made while writing this story. It was my first ever story. I knew i should have rereaded it a fourth time to be sure but i could find the time. I hope that you will read the future chapters as i continue to fix the iusses.