All Comments on 'Lara Swift is Colonized Ch. 01'

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xenoveistxenoveistover 6 years ago
5 Stars

Ignore the imbecile who voted 1 star, this is a great start!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Brilliant

Fantastic start to a well-written story. The low rating is absurd; it was plenty erotic already and it was largely setting the scene!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
That's why it's called Chapter 1...

Let's see how the chapters that follow play out before we start with low ratings. Great job setting the world up!

The_Iron_MaidenThe_Iron_Maidenabout 6 years ago
A niche style I'm grateful to see!

Medicinal, institutional brainwashing is an underappreciated bdsm/mind control style, I'm absolutely happy to see it written so fully. I, admittedly, feel a bit bad for Lara, but this is top quality writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

There is no soccer in britain, please correct.

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