All Comments on 'Larks in the Park Ch. 02'

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shyintxshyintxabout 11 years ago
Good story until

the point were he didn't ask her if she was on the pill like he did suzy. Made it worse with his comment, "Good luck Ruth" why was Suzy more important and if so than suzy was a bitch that just helped her supposedly friend be raped into an unwanted pregnancy. Also if she is such a good friend how has Ruth never noticed the other two are a couple.

ErotonautErotonautabout 11 years ago
Implausible

Like Shyintx, I found the "Good luck Ruth" line rather jarring. Then again, the entire scenario was somewhat implausible, from the casual way Suzy gave up her virginity to Adam (sorry, but even putting just the head of his cock in without consent counts as sexual assault) and then welcomed Peter down the same path, to Ruth's acting as an accessory during what she presumably thought to be Peter raping Suzy. You indicated these girls weren't the brightest, but I'm surprised they were able to tie their own shoelaces.

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