All Comments on 'Last Day of School Pt. 01'

story, can't wait for the next part

Good start. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Lol I love teenage lesbians, my fantasy is to fuck two girls while dey fuck each other

I don't want to discourage you but I'd advise you to try to get more written before posting a chapter. This is a promising intro but that's all you've given us so far. Readers will lose interest if you split it too thinly.

I'm sorry but the story is mediocre but there is room for improvement to a "very good" consensus on the story (it's also too short). Good luck & Happy Writing.

I truly enjoyed your characters. I like how you left us to our imagination. Definitely want more... i hope you continue to write.

How soon do we get the next chapter?

5🌟's

I hope you like it

Can’t wait for the second part