All Comments on 'Last Days of School'

One of the best Father/ Daughter stories.

Full of love and tender affection.

Hope you have another chapter.

5 stars. Very well done. No complaints.

Very very good. Love every second of story!!!!!!!!!!!!

Loved the adultery keep the mom clueless wish she was sober just clueless. I would love more chapters and see the ways they manage keeping mom clueless.

Kisses

Carol

I like a build up and back story of how the incest began. The build up is part of the attraction. This was too straight to the point for my liking. But it was well written

it started really good, but then story line went dull, after Mom barked about Abby doing homework.. it could've actually heated up between Dad & Abby, with the 'no dating' issue, and saying something 'sexually experienced', at risk of her friends figuring out, that she was no longer a virgin, but who was the guy? With Mom's drinking & anger, Dad could've gave her the option of rehab, or leaving her, so then he & Abby could've been together that way too.

Shit

could have been a bit longer

and included more sex

Yummmmmy daddy's cream tastes the best...

more please....