All Comments on 'Last Night of Freedom Ch. 3'

Anyway she could she reach her tally and did it the best way she could. Hurray for her on her hen night out.

Chapters 1 and 3 are erotic. Chapter 2 is not.

i wish i could get my girl to fuck other guys like that!

What a slut!

That`s 99 chances of getting AIDS, what a slut, no wonder the world is such a shit place.

Sluts don't think guys stick together, wrong. This little marriage never happened. Tom married a divorced school teacher a year latter and they now have two kids. Sally is still a slut but at least her biker boyfriend pimp gets money for it between dances at the strip club where she works. She quit counting after the 3ed time she got a S.T.D. The good news is she can't have kids, oh the good life.

I enjoy all of your work and noticed a connection between the stories you write about Tom and Sally. I like the build up in the chapters, this element is very important to keep the reader interested and on the edge. Looking forward to more of your work. Please keep writing!

I knew it would be stupid garbage so I just gave it 1*.

she got fired from a blowjob

she got fired from a blowjob

the wedding got called off because NO man would tie himself to a slut like you. Just the risk of all the social diseases would end it, without further discussions.

The worst people in the world are in this tale. I'm not a prude but what the fuck?

A little light hearted fun. It was also obvious that Tom was no saint.

he gobbles the fattest knob, sips the slimiest semen, betrayed!

Sally dies of an AIDS related disease an the world was a much better place for her passing

A truly bad person. However, looks like they both deserve each other. Thanks.

however, I do imagine there is a ring of truth in this series in the world today...I did enjoy the read.... thank you

SallyJam took quite a risk by using characters NO ONE was going to like (or identify with!). AND, she HAD to know it!

The last two chapters call for considerable 'willing suspension of disbelief' - too much scattered over too many aspects...borrowed attire, stars for kissing too many men, allowing mauling too easily and early, patron contact with performers in an established club, etc.

Sorry, Sally...sad you stopped!

Huh?

She shouldn't get married, just work the street like the whore she is.

Find her a street corner to work!

What a fucking cunt!

And some fucking friends the groom has there!

Wonder if the videographer for the wedding will catch the cum running down her legs as her father escorts her down the aisle?!

Wonder how many STDs she'll be packin' for the honeymoon!

"The wedding that never was"... I can't figure out why!

She was not worth the effort of marriage

this stuff happens 4

It happens and always will continue to happen. Back in my younger days, (when I still had a good bod), I did some side work as a stripper, and worked several bachelorette parties, and also some divorce parties..

Never got laid, but almost always got a blow job out of it.

He has good friends who look out for him, and fuck his whore fiance for him. Great start to a marriage.

All as I can say is RUN RUN RUN.

Cheating cunt and cunt friends

Cut bait mate and run

Now she will become a faithful and dutiful wife and NEVER fuck strange more than a few times a week. R. H.