All Comments on 'Late Night Desert'

Readers will enjoy your stories more if you can correct spelling problems. The drug is "Ambien" not "ambient." And having the shakes is "shuddering" — "shuttering" means putting shutters (those things beside your windows) on a building.

You spelled Sundae wrong at least 7 or 8 times.

Thanks for pointing out all my spelling and miswording. I am sure I have left a dangling participle in here also. BTW there is a probably a few grammar errors also, since I rely on software to catch these, I guess I should find a human proof reader in the future.

Question to Anonymous, you thing I should correct all the mistakes and resubmit and hopefully get a better grade?