All Comments on 'Late Night Edging'

Excellent scenario and images. But the numerous typos/wrong words (and I'm not even including punctuation/capitalization issues) earned you only 4 stars.

take off "clothes" not "cloths"

shoving "onto" the bed not "unto"

"lose" that effect on her not "loose"

trying to "break" her not "brake"

by a "hair's breadth" not "hairs breath"

"cumming" not "cuming" (twice)

half the clothespins "were" gone not "where"

all the "clothespins" were gone not "clothespin"

this was it, finally "relief" not "relieve"

learned "your" lesson not "you"

a "moment's" pause not moments

much needed "relief" not "relieve"

screaming "thrashing" and shaking not "trashing"

Bottom line: no matter how good the scenario, this many errors will distract certain readers to the point where they cringe while reading.

Thank you for your feedback, and I'm glad you liked the story :).

I have submited an edit version, that should fix the errors you mentioned.

And sorry about the punctuation. I mess that up even in german, and more so in english >.<.