All Comments on 'Lauren's Neighbors'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
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i hope there's a continuation with this story i want to see what happens with the other guys and if she keeps seeing jay

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Need the Sequel

What a great story! Agree with previous posters that you ought to tell us how it ends with Lauren and her other black neighbors!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
more!

I love this story. I hope that you finish it. It's a great start!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great story

I love Lauren! Will you be writing more about her? I can't wait to see what the other guys are going to do with her :)

dirtyomandirtyomanalmost 10 years ago
Pretty easy.

Ain't no cunt that stupid, or naive. The story is an OK one, but Lauren's charactor is a bit too naive, & dumb. Especially when you have her as a psych major. Also why would she have calculus in a psych program?

Just another BBC dominance thing.

AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopalmost 8 years ago
Nice

Love it. xoxoxo Annette

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