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All Comments on 'Layover on a Small Planet'

by Chantal Marchon

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Smokin!

Super inventive, good writing, and the rest too hot too handle! lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
almost perfect

I really loved the story, but it needed a little more detail and maybe have it be a little longer.

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