All Comments on 'Leader of the Pack Ch. 13'

I was kind of bad I read on to chapter 14 so this just kind of filled me in! LOL still love it though!! POOR As! I wish she could have kicked Jennas BUTT!!!

You're right I am screaming... can't wait till tomorrow night:-P

I am now staying up at night to read more of your story, making me sleep in and be late in the morning.Its worth it though. I LOVE this story. SO good. I was one of the fortunate ones that read 14 and it was so good. Aislinn and Cullen, my heart breaks for them right now.

I can't wait to see what becomes of Jeanna and Kara. They both need to be dealt with. Keep up with the awesome writing. Please, Please, Please...don't stop writing. I am pretty sure you have a fan club and we LOVE YOU

you are meaaan : ) I hope you post ch.14-15 together : ) I cant waıt to see what wıll happen between two lovers .. I also want some fıght : )) And make up sex : )ahaha

and so will that damn Rafe. Let's hope the potion that Aislinn's grandmother made up will be of some help in the upcoming battle. I'd love to see Aislinn's animal-form rip out Rafe's throat - pretty please!<br><br>

The Jenna-Aislin scene in the limo squicked me out! Don't know why I can find some hot man-on-man action a complete turn on, but girl-girl stuff leaves me stone cold. Well, any future scenes with Jenna will be read with an eye ready to skim forward! LOL --- thanks for the update, and I'm still waiting on Cullen to kick some damn ass already! Come on Cullen, alpha up for me baby.

Just to torment us. If you finished both chapters why not post them together? That's the thing about you writers, you love to keep your readers in suspense.

- for rafe to fall

-for Aislinn and Cullen to get toghether

-oh and the next chapters of coursse !!

i am hurt i didn't get to read 14! so jealous i am just tired of rafe. kara needs to kill him for doing her wrong.

I saw 14 and didn't read it...waiting is agony...cummon it's almost Christmas!!!!!!

although she's on the wrong side. I'm currently thinking if there is a reason that Rafe is so... crazy/insane. Was is something from his past?

Ha! Ha! If I didn't already know that several more chapters of this exist, I definitely would be screaming. I love your story telling.

This series has left me wanting to read the others. I'm glad that you have so many of them posted. I would hate to have to wait for one. You have done a really good job on all of them.

what??!!!!!! He can not get away with this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cant wait to read 14..........

xoxo

Aria

This is my favorite part of the chapter: " She tried to stand but her legs wobbled and she ended up sitting back down. 'Four legs is different than two', Cullen thought gently."

There is something really tender about this. It was well done.

i haaaaaaaaaaaatttttttttttteeeeeeeeeee you for that paticulier cliff hanger if i was not such i nice person i would only give it one star for that but i love the story to much to disrespect it like that

You have my symphathy Lonewolfalpha as I have read all this story several times over the years and sadly it remains unfinished, no babies, not getting the bitch just more questions and that was years ago it is now 2016 and the last anyone heard was in 2012. Like so many stories on lit they just vanish without a care for their readers. You will enjoy the rest of the chapters that are posted though.

Amazing!!

This is messed up. Aislinn should have changed into a wolf. It doesnt make sense that her mate is a wolf and she is something else. My interest in this story just died