by Imyourjezebel
That was actually really quick and to the point; I loved it. It was very well written and turned me on; which is the entire reason I read literotica. If people don’t like it, they can keep their opinions to themselves and move on to a different story. I hope to read more, please continue 😊!!!
crap story,so assault and rape are ok with you huh. If this get you excited, you need some help.
Hey, I am just throwing this out there; but ‘non-consent/reluctance’ IS fantasy rape, you morons. Read a different section if you don’t like it.
An interesting fantasy, but jarring, abrasive and rushed.(writing style not content). You need to develop some of the scenes in more detail, what is happening is fine...but the whys, whats being felt, hows of whats going on really fill out images in the reader's mind as they absorb the fantasy.