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by Aspire523

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BalddudesrockBalddudesrockabout 6 years ago
Excellent first story!

It was hot, and romantic at the same time.

Good job, and I'm looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Spectacular Story

Great writing. Very believable characters. More, please. Five stars!

Hprime2Hprime2about 6 years ago
Awesome

Great story! I hope to read more from you

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
The word is...

... “God”. If you can’t / won’t use it, then write around it. “Oh my goodness”, “oh!” etc. Unless they were saying “oh my gee dash dee!”

Excellent story otherwise.

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