All Comments on 'Learning My Lesson'

I really enjoyed your story and look forward to reading more from you. Keep up the great work (I'm still panting).

I really enjoyed this. Just one correction- in the last 3 paragraphs you switch from 'you' and 'your' to 'he' and 'his'.

keep it up girl, you seem to have what it takes to be a skillful writer in this gendre. when i've finished writing my tales I use an editor from the site called hotti, she's fab at correcting the mistakes that i miss in my re-reads. Not a criticism, just trying to be helpful... more, more, more... now!