All Comments on 'Leave Me to Bleed'

Excellent story, where do I find my own Succubus? ;)

A nice effort but check out the stories by Manyeyedhydra for some awesome guidance on the whole succubus / horror idea.

She’s HOT, if I come I’ll die/burn/be tortured/lose my soul, oh god, what the fuck is she doing, god damn! Holy shit there’s no way I can stop from cumming, oh Jesus Chris, noooooo!

If you are a nice guy, you might live, if you’re a douchey asshole, yer gunna burn.

Along those lines, but with much greater description.

I know what erotic horror is. He is a great writer of it.

I deliberately was not trying for that kind of vibe in this story. You will note that it is *not* classed under "Erotic Horror", but under "NonHuman."

Not bad, but I feel that it would be better if both the introduction and the actual sex scene were longer.