All Comments on 'Leaving the Nest Ch. 00'

I dropped a 5 star score on your work. A rolling surf and your announced intention for a slower roll out both work for me. Put some hair on one of your female characters as the totally hairless look does not work for everyone.

Your a good writer, keep up the good work and please do try to finish up the story.

Keep going, good start.

It seems like a nice start. I'm looking forward to read what you have in store for the readers. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the good work. ^__^

To much description and lagged in many places. The long beginning made me feel as if they were waiting for the sea to give birth to an incredible something and then nothing. It went really no where. No interesting enough for a follow up.