by Nevadaman
I thought it was a good story. The sex scene was played out well and the ending was surprising. Cannot wait for the next story from this author!
What a lil hottie you have here. Great story..Loved the build-up, and the imagery..Well its sooo There~!! The story as a whole had a great flow, and the steamy sex scene just err blows the mind.~!!Loved it..More Please~!!!
Liked how the story led to the climatic end...suprising...
It flowed well. Keep writing Nevadaman