All Comments on 'Leila - The First Level Ch. 01'

Interesting , I will certainly be waiting for the second part.

that was most satisfying... she's the kind of sexy confident woman I dream of.

I am not a native english-speaker either,but your story is amazing ,hoping for more

Man, you are awesome. Keep writing.

Thanks for that positive feedback!

I published the 2nd part already quite a while ago but it is pending since 4 days or so. Is that normal? What can be the problem and who could I talk to?

It is normal to take a few days for a story's approval, so do not worry about it!

I really liked your story, I am looking forward for the next chapter.

Maybe I was expecting the guy to be a little bit more reluctant in the beginning, because the fight against his urges and her strength would be more humiliating for him. You introduce a strong girl to us, why don't you show her skills to use her force? I believe she enjoys to break in the boy...

If you will ever want to publish an illustrated story, I would be honored to help you with some drawings...

Thank you again for all the feedback. Since my email is receive-only, I want to thank everybody who sent me feedback via mail this way.