by SciGuy
...So how'd things turn out? Its a beautiful start, I loved how you gradually fleshed out the characters, and they gradually became very interesting, each in their own way. There is so little real lesbian and TG interaction in most of the stories on here, and I was hooked at the start really. Was a little shocked when it ended and it didn't have a "Ch. 01" anywhere, but thanks for sharing cynthia and please keep writing about her!
Popping a lesbian cherry!!!!!
A very well written story with a novel story line.
Well done 5 Stars
Would make a nice- Hot Movie. You will write more. You will write more.
So that's how you get in a lesbians pants! Now I can rule the world!
(Followed by sinister laugh)
BISH WY DA FUK DID YUW STOP BEFORE DA SLUTS DID DA BOOM BOOM!?!?!?!? MUDAFUKA I HOW DUM R YUW 2 RELEES DA STORY BEFORE DA FUKING BOOM BOOM BISH? YUW AR A MUDAFUKA/DUMAS
#WHERE DA SECS AT
#STUPYD AZZ BISH MUDAFUKA
Firstly, the Ohhh. You've captured the realization that people can experience when reality pleasantly defies the expectations they've held so long. Nicely done.
Secondly, the Um wait. You do realize you didn't finish the story, right?