All Comments on 'Lessons from Daddy Ch. 02'

That's the only critique I have, you need an editor.

That must be the most beautifully constructed sentence I've read for a long while. This one: "Daddy's voice slinked and slithered around the words as smooth as a serpent through the sand." You dealt that imagery so deftly, I actually screamed.

Thanx for role-play adventure. It has been safely filed for future utilization, if you don't mind, the 'wildlife' being a bit skittish since the truck was furbished with spraylights and I can hardly play both mom and son...okay, must say, this piece is so good, it has to be done with your original placing of the sexes. Dad and daughter. Eek! No, sorry, my dad was gross. It will have to be an uncle or brother.

Shot!

I really like this story!