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Loved Michael's sexy description .. silky soft hair on his chest/pecs, and abs, and a cock that goes beyond satisfying Laura!
Wonderfully written, wonderful story, and wonderfully romantic! I look forward to Paris!
I really like where this story is going. I hope there is another chapter coming soon.
Every young man needs a Laura in his life to teach him the things he needs to know to please a woman. When I make love to a woman, I want her to enjoy the experience as much as I do or more. Too many men only think about themselves when it comes to sex. Women are the most precious things God put on earth.
Very sweet! As a young man, I wished I had my own Laura to teach me! Now my wife has found her "Michael" and will hopefully soon begin his lessons! Please write more...
I hope that you will find the time to finish this story as is a great read
Nothing but the best. I like the age split angle. What a way to loose one's virginity. I as many others are waiting expectantly for the next chapter .
5 stars. well written. clever. i hope chapter 3 isn't the end - this is too good!!
There is no better writing on Literotica than this series. Superb in every respect. Keep the story going.
I am so glad I found this story among so many on this site. I became absorbed in the narrative and you created a scenario I really enjoyed. It was fantastic, thank you.
Still a good premise.
Still lacks details re the sex. That's a disappointment.
He loves her ass. But nothing. Why?
And rather that cock quickly into pussy, why doesn't he (or she) take it in hand and rub it up and down her pussy?
Seems hell bent on a direct path from here to there. Needs diversions. Needs detours.
Four stars. Could have been five.