by Talonsheartwish
If this was the aperitif, I can hardly wait for the main course! An excellent, 5 * story that really 'hit the spot' for me.
If there is one comment I could make, it is that some of your paragraphs would benefit from being broken into shorter ones - otherwise, this really was as good as it gets.
Thank you.
I realize that this story will most likely be considered too "vanilla" by many in the lifestyle, but this was the kind of BDSM I enjoy reading--one person taking complete control over another without the need to degrade, abuse, or cause extreme pain.
If there is one thing I I have learned is that there are many types of people and attitudes in the BDSM lifestyle. People are just what they are, some hardcore and others softer and more into the domination side, with myself being one of them. It is this reason that I wrote the scene the way that I did. (No, it is not from true life.)
I am proud that those that have read it have liked it.