All Comments on 'Lewd Fantasies'

by ShamanicHarvest

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Pregnant!?

Kinda bummed about the pregnancy part...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
same here

i am bummed about the prego crap the possibilities of a deformed or re3tarded child increases exponentially and that is just another dependent on life long support ..... or abortion either way it is a shame to ruin a good story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
about pregnancy...

One generation of close family members having a child is no more risky that a woman over 35 having a child with an unrelated person.

Problems don't start until muntiple generations continue inbreeding or if a major genetic defect is carried by both parents.

The more you know...

lantern04lantern04about 8 years ago
Not bad.

A pretty decent short story. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Hot

I actually really like the pregnancy bit, I think it's hot. Too bad my brother would never agree to something like this :/

OrthopodeOrthopodeabout 8 years ago
I want to see more of your work

Straightforward Incest based erotica, I enjoyed it. This is fantasy land, the risks (often overrated) of birth defects in a first generation incest relationship can safely be ignored.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
inbreeding

the truth is if the normal percent is say 10 then an incestuis pregnancy is only 11 not much dif they have actualy studied this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Lol. Im on the pill and 5 paragraphs later she is pregnant. Other wise good story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
My ex can't get enough of her brother .

love the story. My ex and I knew her brother was bi and she wanted to watch me and him. After partying one night she mentioned it. He was ready as long as she was naked too. I have never seen her that horney. He did us both that night. It was their first time. That was over 20 years ago. We still get together every now and then. They usually like to make me there bitch.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Very hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
wonderful story

hope their is a 2nd and a 3rd and a cum-ment to their parents who children they belong to , like 3 or 5 kids they will have , or could have , and the parents can be open to their kids relationship being boyfriend and girlfriend around their own friends but in secret husband and wife and the kids will know also and are ok with it .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great job!

Keep up the fantastic work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
a footsie fetish! LOL!!!

So far I have seen a sock/foot/ and a sweater fetish on lit. I do NOT read Fetish stories so I can just imagine all the idiot stuff. OK, OK Virginia (I don't believe in Santa Claus) you have a mental illness dear go see a shrink OK?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
4 almost a 5

The last two sentences about the baby daughter were a turn off. Otherwise I really liked it.

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