All Comments on 'Life’s Strange Turns Ch. 03-04'

Why do human beings excel at destroying good relationships?!!!

Why do we allow booze to remove our inhibitions and jerk us around?!!!!!

This story easily merits a 5 star billing but you better make sure this ends well LOL!!!!!!

Hmm I do like the story, and I do like the style. But I am not sure I really like Jennifer as a person.

She seems a bit selfish and also keeps making generalisations about how 'men' are supposed to be.... I think she is a bit cliche in view of the opposite sex. - In fact I am surprised Dennis can stand her, she has no discernible good qualities, as opposed to Dennis who seems like a great all rounder.

I believe had he cheated her thoughts would not be as rational toward him as she expects him to be towards her.

Lots of starts either way!

you might try writing other things than erotic fiction! nice read!

You have been using first person all along and suddenly the first paragraph for Jennifer at the bottom of page two was third person. Very disruptive.